남주 누나의 이야기는 잼나게 잘 봤는데... 이 글은 그리 잘 읽히진 않았네요 남주, 여주가 그리 매력적이진 않네요ㅠㅜ 그래도 끝까지 잘 보고갑니당

재벌가 이야기라서 좀 거리감이 느껴지긴하는데 서로 같은곳을 바라보면서도 서로에 대하여 모르고 아파만하는.주일공들이 안타깝네요 결국 이루어지니 다행이긴하지만.

심윤서 작가를 알게되어 진심 기쁩니다
따뜻하고 좋은글. 그마음이 전해지는듯해서
읽는내내 행복했습니다^^

재미있게 읽었내요 영국이 이렇게 축구에 미친 나라인지는 몰랐어요 잘 읽고 갑니다

짧지만 임펙트있고 좋네요 다만 갈등상황이라기엔 남조가 너무쉽게 포기해서 아쉬위요 남조가 더먼저 좋아하고 괜찮아보이기도...

너무 놀라서 딸꾹질이 튀어나왔다. 다른 사람도 아니고 어떻게…….
“미안, 착각했어.”
“선배님. 좋아해요.”
명진의 눈이 커졌다. 승아는 평생 하지 못할 것 같았던 고백을 알코올의 힘을 빌려 하고 말았다.
“처음 봤을 때부터요. 그때부터 좋아했어요.”

저자 김효원은 러브퍼플이라는 닉네임으로 로망띠끄에 상주 중입니다. 개인적으로 심장이 찌르르 울리는 글을 좋아하는 평범한 사람입니다. 한 번 읽고 마는 글이 아닌, 두고두고 꺼내 볼 수 있는 글을 쓰고 싶다는 작은 소망이 있어요.

짧게 끝나는 글이네요 ~ 남주보다는여주가 강단있고 멋지게 나오네요~ 둘다 행복해져서 흐믓한 글입니다.~ 재밌었어요~

늦게나마 자신의 마음을 알게 된 남주 승수가 여주 이린에게 많이 미안해 하고 반성하면서 적극적으로 다가가는 모습이 흐뭇합니다.
에필이 짧아서 아쉽지만 행복한 모습 보여줘서 좋네요.

여주인공이 다른 로설과 달라 색다른 느낌입니다. 조금은 현실적인 시작이나, 오히려 특별한 사연없이 어릴 적 기억만으로도 마음을 다해 사랑하는 남주가 비현실적이라 하겠지요.

잘 읽었어요. 정말 짧은글 좋아요. 사랑하는 사람이랑 같이 있는데 다른 이름을 부른다면 정말 싫어 끔찍하네요. 음~~ 재미있게 잘 읽었어요..

남편의침실의 배경과 주인공 이름이 같아서 인지 비슷한 내용~~~거기에다 찐한 19금내용

The second stanza begins with a reference to God, to divine power: The mighty hand leads to a sloping shoulder: God is Almighty, that hand can be so mighty as God.
In lines 9 and 10 (The hand that signed the treaty bred a fever,/ And famine grew, and locusts came:). It makes reference to plagues that people who are physically and psychologically injured in a war have to endure.

death, the only way of not finding death in a natural way. This two lines are, in my opinion, the most brilliant ones in the whole poem.
In the line 2, Five sovereign fingers taxed the breath, Thomas shows the fingers of the hand as kings, as powerful figures; we can see this again later, two lines further down. The expression

initiate and to end a war with a simple sign in an insignificant piece of paper. This is shown in a masterly way in lines 7 and 8: A goose’s quill has put end to murder/ That put an end to talk.
Thomas does not use the term death, even it would be a more appropriate word for a poem which talks about war and its consequences, but he uses murder to emphasize the dramatic effect of

The rhyme is unique for the whole poem: ABAB. The vocabulary used by Thomas is not very complicated, but there are some words difficult to understand even for English students, as goose (line 7), locusts (line 10) or scribbled (line 12).
As I have said before, this text of Thomas is full of words with double meaning that make this poem an excellent portrait of what happens when the (hand of a) man has got the power to

3), a scribbled name (stanza 3, line 4), etc.
Synonymy is another lexical device used in the poem: did a king to death (stanza 2, line 4) and murder (stanza 2, line 3) can be said to be identical meaning. Also, paper and treaty can be said to be synonymous. The use of fingers and hand is an instance of hyponymy. The implication of this is that the poet uses them as elements of foregrounding to lay emphasis on the actual

presents the hand as if acting independently of its owner whose brain must have given the signal before the actual signing was done. Also, we have fingers taxed the breath, A hand that rules pity, a hand that rules heaven, etc.
On the other hand, there is a preponderance of the nominal group in the poem, and most of these nominal groups are inanimate: The hand that signed the paper, The globe of dead (stanza 1, line

The use of “the” in the dead in line 1 of stanza 4 is homophoric and anaphoric since the phrase the dead could be said to get an universal application. Also we have in the poem the use of participant relations where parts of the body and certain elements are made to act as if on their own volition. For instance, in the title of the work, The hand that signed the paper, the poet

In a linguistic analysis of the poem, we can identify the use of certain cataphoric, anaphoric and homophoric items. For instance, the use of “the” in stanza 1(the hand, the paper, the breath and the globe) is cataphoric, while the subsequent uses or “the” are defining, so they are anaphoric. Examples are: The mighty hand or The five kings.